SMELLS LIKE TEEN FLANNEL

Soft.
Caressing.
Messing with my grunge.
Hard edged music has no place
surfaced in flannel.
But I love
the warmth;
the comfort,
but something’s not right!
I stay up half the night
writing songs. Is it wrong to fill
“Love songs” with bitter angst, while
plaid and staid flannel is against my skin?
How can I win?
Find nirvana?
Do I wanna?
Can Cobain be channeled
sans the flannel? I can’t tell
but it sure as hell smells like it!

(C) Walter J. Wojtanik

dVerse Tuesday Poetics (Scent)

8 thoughts on “SMELLS LIKE TEEN FLANNEL

  1. Shawna

    You are speaking to my generation. I still wear flannel regularly, and I still love Nirvana and G&R. I wonder if there’s a poet who writes all ’90s, all the time. 🙂

  2. And there was I thinking flannel = facecloth, washcloth, like in England…
    also remembering the phrase “flannel-foot” when one tried to flatter, fawn, a superior ….aren’t words flannelicious?

  3. sanaarizvi

    This is absolutely outstanding, Walter! 💘 I especially resonate with; “Is it wrong to fill “Love songs” with bitter angst, while plaid and staid flannel is against my skin?”

  4. Rob Kistner

    …teen spirit — 👊🏼 This was a well written, fun read Walt. It moved 100 mph while hitting hard with imagery. Excellent dude… ✌🏼

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