SOULFUL SURF

She beckons,
a seductress in a soft salty hush.
You rush to her embrace,
her spray on your face
and the glint of sunlight
slightly blinding you, yet reminding
you of her allure. You come
to her shore to adore and
worship, cast under her spell
and the swell of tides will not hide
her passion. Waves crashing
and her undertow grips you.
She slips you into her hand
and the sand softens your landing.
You are standing in her wake
and make no mistake,
she controls your soul.

© Walter J Wojtanik – 2018

 

42 thoughts on “SOULFUL SURF

  1. A gorgeous metaphor, Walter: the sea as a salty seductress.I love the lines:
    ‘Waves crashing
    and her undertow grips you.
    She slips you into her hand
    and the sand softens your landing’.

  2. Hudson

    My goodness, Walter. This is mighty hot. Especially this:

    “You rush to her embrace,
    her spray on your face”

    I can’t imagine a more violent, controlling, or delicious lover than the sea.

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