COOL PRUNES

I ate plums that were
soon to be prunes.
They were cool.
I was moved by them.
They were good
(I had them for breakfast)
So, so sweet! Sorry,
but they were delicious!

(C) Walter J Wojtanik – 2017

QKJ #28 – Rewrite Williams

Assignment:

Rewrite
William Carlos Williams’ “This Is Just To Say”

This Is Just To Say

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

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