MEMORY MAKES HER RETURN

Melancholy memory brought her
to the playground of her youth,
but the truth is, she had never left.
On the third swing she sees herself
gently undulating, her rosy cheeks
contrary to her pale complexion;
a reflection of the past long gone.
Feet dragging, kicking up the dirt like powder,
they stray from the grass more green,
a scene she replays with her every return.
She yearns for the days where a gentle
fling of her head would send a spray of gold;
her blonde tresses in the wind.
From the nearby bench I can see her;
having made a return of my own.
Both grown now and wiser,
like an erotic seduction
the emotion of these fond memories
come to cover and protect her fragile heart.

THE SUNDAY WHIRL – Wordle #66

Published in: on 23 July 2012 at 3:43 AM  Comments (31)  

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  1. Lovely, Walt!

  2. lovely indeed. Sometimes we need those memories to get us past current situations. Well done.

  3. This is good, Walt. I can picture myself on that swing with all those yearnings for the past. Life keeps moving, and we will keep writing our way through it. Glad I stopped here for this one, thanks.

    • Glad you came by as well, Brenda. Thanks.

  4. You brought to mind a park I used to play at, there was a concrete boat in the middle of the dirty sand. We used to climb on it and pretend we were sailing away from the city. Jumping off was so much safer when we were smaller people. I think though that they may decided concrete structures for children’s parks were not the smartest and safest play equipment. I don’t think it’s around anymore… Sometimes you can’t go back because when you do … it’s not there. Nice piece.

    I’m here:
    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/sw-66-enchanted.html

    • Thanks Jules. Enjoyed yours as well!

  5. Walt, sorry, I haven’t been round to read, I am experiencing some cervical neck problems, but I am on the mend. 10 more days with the neck brace … ugh!

    Now, this poem is gorgeous, truly gorgeous …

    “her blonde tresses in the wind.
    From the nearby bench I can see her;
    having made a return of my own.
    Both grown now and wiser,
    like an erotic seduction
    the emotion of these fond memories
    come to cover and protect her fragile heart”

    • Get well soon, Pamela! Thanks for your kind words!

  6. I love this! Those first three lines are captivating, Walt. I think we’re always a kid down deep, but wisdom is earned.

    • We lose our inner child, we may as well put our muses into storage, Laurie. Agree on all points. Thanks for that!

  7. Beautifully written, Walt. I seem to spend a lot of time taking trips down Memory Lane these days. It all seems so dear now. Favorite line: “fling of her head would send a spray of gold;
    her blonde tresses in the wind.”

    • Thanks Marianne. I enjoy those excursions back myself, always keeping one foot in the present!

  8. Excellent poem with a good dash of sadness too

    • Thank you, Cathy. A dash of sadness and a pinch of love.

  9. Every girl who’s been on a swing and felt the breeze finger her hair will instantly recognise themselves in this poem. This is a photograph coloured with words, Walt. Splendid.

    • I appreciate that Misk. These wordles give us such scope to write our hearts.

  10. As kids we can’t wait to grow up and…do. As mature adults we then wonder why we rushed to grow up and take on all the grown up woes and responsibilities too and then think back to the good old days.
    This was a lovely read :)

  11. Whenever I go for a quiet moment in the park, I have to stop at the swings and try them for a moment. I love your poem and the feelings and memories it arouses. Thank you,

    Elizabeth

    • I do the same thing, Elizabeth. How did Simon & Garfunkle put it? “Preserve your memories, they’re all that’s left you!”

  12. [...] of words to play with each Sunday. And also loved reading thru my friend’s, especially Walt, Sara, Jo Ann, Carol, Misky and the amazing Hannah. Go have a read when you get a chance. (Poetry [...]

  13. Memories will get you every time! Well done Walt.

    • Thanks Veronica. Yeah, they will get you!

  14. Wow, Walt. This is delicious. I love the mirroring of the older woman and her younger self.

    • Thanks Tania! The comparison does come through nicely.

  15. I can see myself on this swing so clearly. Thanks, Walt.

  16. Some beautiful images in this especially the golden tresses, great wordling, Walt!! :) ’s


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